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 Post Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2017 2:35 pm 
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Started a new story in the blog, this one should go smoother, I have a plot already worked out.
The Noble Gasses
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22

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     Post Posted: Sat Feb 04, 2017 1:40 pm 
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    I added a new chapter to my latest story, I think I didn't comment right when I add ed chapter 2, so now it's 3 chapters.

    Enjoy. ;)

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    Chapter 4 is up now.

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    I'll probably be going to once a week now.

    Chapter 5

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    Chapter 6 is posted.

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    Chapter 7 is up.

    I'm concerned it might be moving a little slowly. Any comments?

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    There is set up, the stories are shorter than one like Hungry Jungle, but more important (to me anyways) is consistency of updates and that your doing great on. Plus re-writing a song like the one you did is hard but came out great!

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    Chapter 8 is up now. No new songs, there was too much story in the way to reach it. I'll probably get to it about halfway through Chapter 9.

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    The Noble Gases Chapter 9 is up, new song with this one. More fighting and more Oggie next week, I could have done the trip east in one or two paragraphs but I needed the room for character development, so it took longer.

    All of the enemy's songs will be this genre, so if you don't like 80's pop, you know who the villains are.

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    The Noble Gases Chapter 10 is up. More Oggie, but no combat :( .

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    Chapter 11 is up

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    Here's Chapter 12. Sorry it's late, I think I'll move to Tuesday night updates, I have more time Tuesday night.

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    Here is lucky thirteen.

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    Chapter 14 is up now. I hope to have the next one on Saturday, now Tuesdays are bad. :x

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    Well, I'm trying to keep them going one a week. IRL keeps me from more.


    Chapter 15

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    Yay! Switched to Saturday this week for Chapter 16. It works better IRL.

    Part of what I'm working on here is consistency: setting an external goal and keeping it.

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    Chapter 17 is up.

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    Yeah. Been a while. :( Whew! It's been a while.

    I've been working at going pro with my writing, serious professional, and while I have always enjoyed writing Erfworld fanfic, it's not something I can make a profit at (legally--or practically for that matter.) I still hold to this goal.

    I am a writer.
    I am becoming a professional writer.
    I will become a successful professional writer.
    Being a successful professional writer, to me, means making a good living from my writing and being invited to speak, as a writer, at a convention, by someone I do not know with the authority to make that offer.
    I will set other goals as I achieve the ones I have planned to continue to grow in my craft.

    Even with what I said about what being a professional writer means to me, one of the attributes of a professional is reliability. I wouldn't feel bad about ignoring trash, but this story is not trash (in my opinion) and, if you're reading this far, you probably don't think so either. I have a responsibility to finish this story, and to finish it as well as I began it (that means no "And then the Titans croaked everyone, THE END.")

    I want to apologize to everyone who tipped me during the first 17 chapters to encourage me to write more. I wish I deserved it as much as we both thought I did then, and I will finish this story.

    I do have both a full time and a part time job, so it won't be a chapter a week. I hope there is some improvement in my craft over the last year and a half, but if there isn't, I really, REALLY hope you'll all tell me, so I know what to work on.

    Without further ado, here is Chapter 18

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    New one. Last chapter was mostly done a year and a half ago; this one is all new.

    Chapter 19

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    Here's Chapter 20

    Heading south for the the final battle.

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