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 Post Posted: Sat May 28, 2011 5:03 pm 
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That comma shouldn't be there, and it should be him not her. Fixed and modified the last two sentences to clean this up. I should probably should pay more attention andproof this before submitting.

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     Post Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 12:48 pm 
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    Hurrah! An update! :D

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     Post Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 2:34 pm 
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    WaterMonkey314 wrote:
    Hurrah! An update! :D


    Shhhhhhh! People will find out!

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     Post Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 11:28 am 
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    I'm noticing that you refer to 'schmukers' whenever you talk about buying something, or popping a unit. However, the currency of Erfworld is 'shmuckers'. Is there an in-story reason for it?

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     Post Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 4:21 pm 
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    Cnor wrote:
    I'm noticing that you refer to 'schmukers' whenever you talk about buying something, or popping a unit. However, the currency of Erfworld is 'shmuckers'. Is there an in-story reason for it?


    Freudian typo? I'll need to go through and change that. Stupid me for not checking the spelling the first time I used it and just guessing from memory.

    Should be fixed now

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     Post Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 8:59 am 
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    Any chance of a new update on this?

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     Post Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2012 12:50 am 
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    Cnor wrote:
    Any chance of a new update on this?

    Funny I was thinking of updating and saw this.

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    I dont know if you guys have heard the sad news, but Pink Floyd keyboard virtuoso Richard Wright has died after a short battle against cancer today. He was 65.

    Very very sad and tragic news. R.I.P Richard

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     Post Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 4:28 pm 
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    AndrewB1979 wrote:
    I dont know if you guys have heard the sad news, but Pink Floyd keyboard virtuoso Richard Wright has died after a short battle against cancer today. He was 65.

    Very very sad and tragic news. R.I.P Richard


    You're about 4 years late, and not even on the right day.

    And this has what exactly to do with this comic?

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     Post Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2012 2:56 am 
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    story updated

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     Post Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2012 8:09 am 
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    tigerusthegreat wrote:
    story updated

    Cool! Thanks!

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     Post Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2012 3:17 pm 
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    Story updated

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     Post Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2012 10:14 am 
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    What? The main story is at two pages now? Oh the humanity!

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     Post Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 10:06 pm 
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    Back by popular demand.....HAMRATIO!

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     Post Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 11:32 pm 
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    Cool . . . and it looks like Regus's luck operates by leeching others. Wonder if his troops were wearing red tunics?

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     Post Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 3:20 pm 
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    Sieggy wrote:
    Cool . . . and it looks like Regus's luck operates by leeching others. Wonder if his troops were wearing red tunics?


    Well they are legionawies, so red tunics with steel armor, but so is regus.

    Mechanically, he cast luckamancy on the javelin attacks. The two that hit the birds were crits, as was the indirect hit on the hitchcock. But karma has to balance, so those good rolls had to come from somewhere.

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     Post Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 9:42 pm 
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    another update, and let's play spot the Shakespeare references....

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     Post Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 10:42 pm 
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    at this point, I just assume everything hameratio says is a spear refrance until proven otherwise...

    also, is reguss using retoconjurition? seems about right...

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     Post Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 10:53 pm 
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    bob the 6th wrote:
    at this point, I just assume everything hameratio says is a spear refrance until proven otherwise...

    also, is reguss using retoconjurition? seems about right...


    Dont be silly, there are no retconjurers :-p

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     Post Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2012 12:21 am 
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    been building up to this reveal for a while, but people have easily guessed it. Regus is indeed not a warlord at all, but a Retconjurer who reconjures himself into being a warlord every turn.

    However, retconjuration is a forbidden school of magic, destined only for the titan's to use as they see fit (the only recorded use [and how it was recorded nobody knows] is the use of retconjuration to replace deletionism with retconjuration [deletionism being itself deleted, showing both schools being sole examples of themselves])

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