My first post in the Erfworld forums, driven partly by my burning desire to get people to read my work. Find it here.
It's hosted on Authonomy, Harper-Collins' internet slushpile. If you really like it, create a profile and put it on your bookshelf - that tells H-C that it's worth them taking a look at and considering publishing someday. If you don't like it, please let me know why. Either way, consider checking out the rest of the site; there's some pretty good material up there. Also, you can put your own work up there too - just has to be 10,000 words long or longer.