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 Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
 Post Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 6:39 pm 
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Infidel wrote:
It's turn based. Parson's timely arrival is not important.


Well, it's real time within turns. Ofc, there is still the whole sync-up effect between mutiple hexes, as time passes at different rates.

Presumably, if Parson had arrived 5 mins later, then he would have missed the start of the battle (unless Erfworld was waiting for his arrival).

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
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    I presume others noticed the subtitle for the block, "Meet the Jetstones." Yes, it is a reference to the Hannah Barbara cartoon. However, it also implies much of the narrative is going to focus on a new cast of characters: King of Jetsone (what was his name again?), Ossomer, and Traemennis. Hopefully, they'll be interesting characters and thus survive the run. This would also mean the "decapatation" strike isn't going to work.

    That being said, Maggie's "oh dear," might be as simple losing contact, not an apocalypse.

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    Looks like it's from Parson's POV, not omniscient.

    We've never been told Parson knows about the "support plan" thing.


    Eh, there's a good chance in all his talks with Sizemore at least (and possibly Maggie) that it came up. I mean, realistically, the narrative we receive can't include every thing learned by all characters. Either the details or to minor to warrant revelation, or they are kept secret to later create a revelation.

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
     Post Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 6:41 pm 
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    Awesome art work. Stanley looks awesome with his cape. I like how the decrypted units are trusted less than the natural allies when it comes to guarding stuff. Kind of funny. Especially if Stanley didn't have anything to do with the rebellion. And there appears to be a speed bump worthy of an "oh dear". This is going almost as badly as when Wanda let off all of those doom spells and one of them went "fr-doom" instead of inflicting proper a "doom". Can't wait for the action... :mrgreen:

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
     Post Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 6:43 pm 
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    I just LOVE the artwork; the new artist was a brilliant choice. Almost missed the fireflower from the Mario Bros games.

    (There so many posts on these reaction threads! I think I'm going to have to choose to just start ignoring them.)

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
     Post Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 6:50 pm 
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    Infidel wrote:
    Because omniscient narrators don't give opinions

    They don't? Seems I have just found the new frontier of literature that will allow me to write a groundbreaking novel that'll be required reading in colleges the world over.

    Anyway, it seems there's a confusion between omniscient narrator and heterodiegetic narrator. A narrator may very well be opinionated, misleading, non-omniscient, and still not a character in the story. (If the narrator is a character in the story, then you have a homodiegetic narrator.)

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    Eh, there's a good chance in all his talks with Sizemore at least (and possibly Maggie) that it came up. I mean, realistically, the narrative we receive can't include every thing learned by all characters. Either the details or to minor to warrant revelation, or they are kept secret to later create a revelation.


    We've never seen him asking about how he came to be here. There's some angst about whether it's real or not, but all the questions he asked was about the way the world worked, not why he was here. Plus, there's only two persons who know about the support plan thing: Stanley and Wanda.


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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
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    Lamech wrote:
    I like how the decrypted units are trusted less than the natural allies when it comes to guarding stuff.


    Am I the only one who felt bad for those guards?

    Most other units would at least have some freedom of movement.

    However, if ordered to guard a room, you would have to obey and just stand there. Presumably, they stand nearly perfectly still.

    Ofc, maybe there is a change of the guard every few hours.

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
     Post Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 6:53 pm 
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    Love the new art and new artist. I am worried, can she keep up this level of quality on a twice weekly basis? Thats some good art right there, feels like it takes time.

    Love the little details too- looks like a painting of a flight of dragons (I dub it Stanley's Return) and maybe the sacking of a city, maybe the capture/mass disbanding of Unaroyal?

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
     Post Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 6:56 pm 
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    The art style is so gloriously serious, Great work Xin!! I couldn't help but notice in panel 2 Stanley's flutters towards the door, presumably becuase he's on a parapet looking out across his capital, but as he walks through the door the cape is fluttering towards where he previously stood at pretty much a 90" angle, either Stanley uses speedhax to make his walk, or there's a natural thinkamancy at work that ensures that capes always flutter in the opposite direction that the wearer is walking
    hahahaha

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
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    Lord Kasavin wrote:
    I presume others noticed the subtitle for the block, "Meet the Jetstones." Yes, it is a reference to the Hannah Barbara cartoon. However, it also implies much of the narrative is going to focus on a new cast of characters: King of Jetsone (what was his name again?), Ossomer, and Traemennis. Hopefully, they'll be interesting characters and thus survive the run. This would also mean the "decapatation" strike isn't going to work.


    The king of Jetstone is, I believe, King Slately. (Possibly a pun on "stately" (going with the positive-adjective names) and "slate" (stone-based names) ).

    [edit] Boop, checked the wiki, and the name is also a combination of the names "Mr. Spacely" and "Mr. Slate", from The Jetsons and The Flintstones, respectively. HOW MANY PUNS CAN BE FIT IN ONE NAME dear lord. [/edit]

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
     Post Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 7:19 pm 
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    I'm a little disappointed that the Summer updates stopped at 49 instead of an even fifty, but it's still nice to get back to the comic. Having a much faster regular update rate is also nice, though only two updates per week means that progress will be fairly slow for a dramatic comic.

    Capturing Ansom, or any Decrypted for that matter, could very well change how the game is played, so to speak. Of course, in order to explore this, we'll need a Mad Scientist type character. I doubt any Erfworlders would pick up that role too well, since it depends on out of the box thinking, but they can always pop someone with a different point of view, like Charlie, or summon the ultimate Mad Scientist like Stanley summoned Parson.

    I wonder is the table they're using is the new version of the old one. WIthout Misty for Lookamancy, they can't detect everything like, but doing a mind meld with just Jack and Maggie would still allow them to have layout of the battlefield and doesn't run the risk of a mind break when they're done.

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
     Post Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 7:24 pm 
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    I really like the look of the pikers : )

    Also, can't wait for the next one!

    The color of the table hex's seems a little strange though...

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
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    Oh a parallel to the beginning of Book I? So I'm guessing we can expect the same awesomeness as before?

    Though I note (and love) a lot of the subtle humor in this page.

    Fireflower a potted vine?

    More Oriental influence in the architecture? Definitely wasn't expecting that, but this IS Erfworld after all.
    I'm now expecting to one day see a giant green pipe somewhere. Not necessarily in Gobwin Knob, but SOMEwhere.

    Also: I'm loving Stanley in the pants T-shirt and cape like a little kid pretending to be a super hero. It suits him pretty well.

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
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    Gez wrote:
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    Because omniscient narrators don't give opinions

    They don't? Seems I have just found the new frontier of literature that will allow me to write a groundbreaking novel that'll be required reading in colleges the world over.


    Good storytelling isn't about writing something completely original, it's about interesting the readers and building a story within a believable context with characters and themes familiar, and thus believable, to the reader. Ergo, it's about creative writing of unoriginal themes. Want original narration? Write a book in ten different languages, alternating languages with every word, with an 11th language resolving any differences in grammar. You've now written a groundbreaking novel, that'll probably be required reading in colleges the world over in a few decades.

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    Anyway, it seems there's a confusion between omniscient narrator and heterodiegetic narrator. A narrator may very well be opinionated, misleading, non-omniscient, and still not a character in the story. (If the narrator is a character in the story, then you have a homodiegetic narrator.)


    Yes, but then the narrator is a character telling the story outside the story. Like Princes's Bride. The grandfather was reading from a book giving opinions here and there. Ergo, the opinionated Narrator was a character, whether inside or outside the story.

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
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    Jetstones
    Meet the Jetstones
    There a modern royal family
    From the
    town of Jetstone
    And they're really pissed off at Stanley...

    Sorry, love, couldn't resist :mrgreen:

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
     Post Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 7:55 pm 
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    Does the presence of guards during your own turn seem a little off to anyone else? If it's your turn, no one is going to attack you. So presumably if you're in a non-combat area that's the time when units could slack off a little, and you could have your units do... something else. Then when your turn is nearing its end, you put your guards in place to protect against enemy action, if any. Unless Stanley is really big on propriety or something, and it seems to me that since royals seem to keep guards (again; for propriety? show? custom?) that Stanley would want to break from that tradition.

    Or it could just be artistic choice, I'm cool with that too.

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    Unclever title wrote:
    I'm now expecting to one day see a giant green pipe somewhere. Not necessarily in Gobwin Knob, but SOMEwhere.



    I'm hoping for a big green pipe leading into GK, maybe with a Stanley flag flying over the tower and some fireworks going off around it. Maybe a couple of Marbit brothers in red or green overalls.

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
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    Great to see Book 2 start! All-around excellence!

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    Phædrus2129 wrote:
    Does the presence of guards during your own turn seem a little off to anyone else? If it's your turn, no one is going to attack you.
    There's always the possibility of treachery. Stanley doesn't trust his direct subordinates any more than they trust him.
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    Does it strike anyone else as weird that there is an "Owiental Dwagon" theme present though we have never seen that type of Dwagon?
    No. It could exist somewhere else in the world they intend to conquer, it could be right here in GK and we just haven't seen it, it could be a stylistic choice, or it could even be that Erfworld has its own mythological creatures and they're just slightly more realistic there than here.

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     Post subject: Re: Book 2 - Page 1
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    Infidel wrote:
    Yes, but then the narrator is a character telling the story outside the story. Like Princes's Bride. The grandfather was reading from a book giving opinions here and there. Ergo, the Narrator was a character, whether inside or outside the story.


    I was actually imagining the Discworld narrator when I read those lines :P

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    removed, not in the mood to argue


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