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 Post Posted: Thu May 27, 2010 6:38 pm 
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oooh...that was excellent. I liekd the throwing knifes part, I only realized later the connection to cicuses :)

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     Post Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:28 pm 
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    There is still more to come, but it will probably be at least another week before I get a chance to post anything new. I've been busy with other, more important, non-erf projects. Sorry for the long wait and thank you for being patient.

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     Post Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 1:54 pm 
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    Just read up to current, and I'm loving it! :)

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     Post Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 5:50 am 
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    Woohoo! Update!

    More plx :P

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     Post Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 9:22 am 
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    Azgrut wrote:
    Woohoo! Update!

    More plx :P

    Request granted. ;)

    And thanks for reading!

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     Post Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 11:01 am 
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    You're making it real easy to hate the prince. I like it.

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     Post Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 5:28 am 
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    That was quick :).

    I like it.

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     Post Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 4:48 pm 
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    I saw your story yeasterday, thumbs up.
    As said before: more updates plz :)

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     Post Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:43 pm 
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    There will probably be another update within the next 24 hours (possibly the next 12). ;)

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     Post Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:26 am 
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    The story is getting clearer and clearer. The real villan emerges. :)

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     Post Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 4:41 am 
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    3 words: oh. my. god.

    this is an excellent story! i had a bit free time before i went to sleep, then i checked this story out of curiosity...and then i decided it was far better than a few hours sleep :)

    i can't find anything else to say...story is very good. but you should have made some names cuter, more erf-ish. like cwocodile instead of croc would have been nice to see, although don't misunderstand me, i don't think it is a big deal.

    UPDATE!

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     Post Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 6:51 am 
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    Thanks zilfallon. That means a lot.

    I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, because I enjoy writing it. And I still plan on seeing this story through to the end, so more updates are sure to come. ;)

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     Post Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 3:18 am 
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    Man, I really gotta get some more updates posted soon.

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     Post Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 11:43 pm 
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    Yet another enjoyer checking in to add to the encouragement for both altruistic and selfish reasons. Looking forward to seeing the next development.

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     Post Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 1:42 pm 
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    Interesting update, you gave us a good idea about Eliza's personality. And that last line...She's really selfish...They just believe that Traz is gone for good and trying to get croaked without regrets. Phineas is the only person who doesn't have that much negative thoughts i think. Poor Phineas, there can't be much a Carnymancer can do to save his side :(
    Well great...i hate you, because now i have 2 things to hope for when i click Erfworld link in my browser... :D

    1)An update including Lord Hamster
    2)Update to A Tale from Traz

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    You know... at this point you boops aren't beating dead horses any more. You're making glue.

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     Post Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 2:15 pm 
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    zilfallon wrote:
    Well great...i hate you, because now i have 2 things to hope for when i click Erfworld link in my browser... :D

    1)An update including Lord Hamster
    2)Update to A Tale from Traz

    I am flattered. I'm just glad that people read my story on occasion, but knowing people actually wait for it to update is all the more encouraging. Now I just hope that I don't somehow disappoint. ;)

    Thank you everyone who reads my story!

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     Post Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 4:53 pm 
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    great story, the puns are great and really tie it into erfworld as a whole. please keep writing, i'm hooked

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     Post Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 7:35 pm 
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    Yeah, this story is awesome. It's like having a second Erfworld comic. Keep up the great writing!

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     Post Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 11:29 am 
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    I was all set and ready to post another update last night, but then the power went out for a second and the internet wouldn't work again until this morning. :| Hopefully I'll have better luck tonight.

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     Post Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 11:54 am 
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    Ouch, that must have hurt :( Keep trying, it won't always fail :D

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    You know... at this point you boops aren't beating dead horses any more. You're making glue.

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