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 Post Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 11:49 am 
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Feel free to criticize anything I've written; I'm always happy to know how I can improve my work.

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My Erfworld fiction, The Shadow, and Comments for it.

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     Post Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 4:41 pm 
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    Why would he fight for them if he wants/expects all knowledge of him to be extinguished?

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     Post Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 6:17 pm 
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    I think some higher power that set his creation is what wanted his existence to not be known. Shadow, on the other hand, doesn't care who knows about it and feels that it's more important to repay his debt.

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     Post Posted: Wed Aug 28, 2013 2:00 am 
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    The Shadow? AAAAAGGGGHHHH!

    Felt that was necessary.

    looks interesting, keep it up.

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     Post Posted: Wed Aug 28, 2013 3:16 am 
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    I know, not the most interesting or original title, but it's the only one that fits and it's a character idea I've had in various forms for a long time. And I will be keeping it up - expect one post daily for now; this may get slower later on, as at the moment I don't have much of a workload, but for now I should be posting daily.

    And Sir Shadow is correct - Fate ordained that he pop, but the instigator of that popping wished that his existence be unknown.

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     Post Posted: Mon Sep 02, 2013 11:15 pm 
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    That was cool. Kept the total feel of Erfworld even when focused on a very non-Erfy character.

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     Post Posted: Tue Sep 03, 2013 4:56 am 
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    Thank you.

    On a general note, new installments will be slower due to a vast decrease in my free time.

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