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 Post Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2016 6:56 pm 
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I guess this is how things are done here?

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     Post Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2016 8:40 pm 
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    Hahaha. Very direct and to the point. Of course the Carnyvale would have snake-oil salesmen.

    I like the writing so far: Erfly without being overdone. I'll be interested to see where this story goes.

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     Post Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2016 8:07 am 
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    Inside was is a small purple snake, watching him with curiosity, and the man smiled broadly down at it, and more specifically, the other contents of the jar. ... . He held up the snakeskin to the light, judging its quality through some spectrum only likely knew.


    It's got the beginning of something interesting....like a certain game :lol:

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     Post Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2016 7:54 am 
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    Fun story. Thank you for sharing.

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     Post Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2016 1:10 pm 
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    Seems interesting. Hope this continues and that the poor bugger is hired by a side that appreciates him.

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    Interesting! I'm really curious what actual caster type he might be, whether the snake speaks to him because it's smart... or he's into Flower Power shrooms...

    Like everyone's said, it's an interesting start, and I'm curious to see where it goes. :) ]8\

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    Nice update.

    Two spelling bits.

    You use curly instead of curtly in the 3rd paragraph I think. And this sentence needs revising. "I'll make you fresh a normal turn start"

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     Post Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2016 4:23 pm 
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    Its a cruel irony that some of the most useful Casters go bankrupt because of the stupidity, ignorance and bigotry of the Rulers on Erfworld. :(

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     Post Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2016 8:19 am 
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    Dewey the Signamancer wrote:
    Its a cruel irony that some of the most useful Casters go bankrupt because of the stupidity, ignorance and bigotry of the Rulers on Erfworld. :(


    I think "stupidity" would have sufficed :D

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     Post Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2016 7:47 pm 
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    Xellos wrote:
    Dewey the Signamancer wrote:
    Its a cruel irony that some of the most useful Casters go bankrupt because of the stupidity, ignorance and bigotry of the Rulers on Erfworld. :(


    I think "stupidity" would have sufficed :D
    Nah there's some subtle distinctions. Ignorant Rulers don't know what Casters can do and don't know that there's more to know other than what they already know. Stupid Rulers know what Casters can do but can't connect the dots to make best use of them and come up with clever strategies for them. Bigoted Rulers don't care what the Casters can do they don't want to use them no matter how useful they are because they don't like them.

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