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 Post Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:26 pm 
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Comments, questions, suggestions or just some good old fashioned grammer naziing

I'm sure you all know how it works by now ;)

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     Post Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 6:11 pm 
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    Ok lets try this again, despite lifes best efforts i have finally managed to get an update done. I'd appreciate any help on grammer and any Stupid-world terms that need translated etc. I've tried to get most of the emo stuff into this update so following updates will include substantially less of that. Plus i want to see if my refrences are as blatantly obvious as i think they are.

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     Post Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 1:41 am 
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    WW2 references for the win?

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     Post Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 5:40 am 
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    would it have been as painfully obvious if i hadn't used the name Montgomery

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     Post Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 8:39 am 
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    Stryke wrote:
    would it have been as painfully obvious if i hadn't used the name Montgomery


    Until I saw Montgomery, I glossed over Aryan, but I would have picked up on it with the side of Al-Eye. Good job overall, it's interesting.

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