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 Post Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:01 pm 
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Hopefully this will work as intended...

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     Post Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:13 pm 
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    Nice. can't really say much cause it's the first chapter, but looks like it is heading in a good direction.

    i think you used thinkamancer and turnamancer interchangebly when the two casters meet.

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     Post Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:16 pm 
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    yay wrote:
    Nice. can't really say much cause it's the first chapter, but looks like it is heading in a good direction.

    i think you used thinkamancer and turnamancer interchangebly when the two casters meet.


    I'll double check that.

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     Post Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 9:19 pm 
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    Nice. But do the Tonks have Hits?

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     Post Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 9:48 pm 
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    Nihila wrote:
    Nice. But do the Tonks have Hits?


    I knew I forgot a stat...

    They should have 12 hit.

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     Post Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 6:47 pm 
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    I like it a lot. I'm imagining that the thinkamaccer will be sent back and forth like a tennis ball, captured by one side and then the other...

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     Post Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 11:02 pm 
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    ragingrage wrote:
    I like it a lot. I'm imagining that the thinkamaccer will be sent back and forth like a tennis ball, captured by one side and then the other...


    Thanks. I'm glad when people enjoy my stories.

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    I enjoyed the Frozen Conflict, but I was wondering if you'd be finishing this story? Kind of a shame to not see the new warlord's plan to eliminate the pwnzers

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