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 Post Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 2:31 pm 
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Anything and everything you want to say about it, do so here. Don't hold back, let me hear it.

EDIT (1-28): Thanks for that catch, I've put my best retconjurer on the job.

Second part is up. Deep crows are the IP of Mike Krahulik and Jerry Holkins over at Penny Arcade. Used without permission. Please don't sue. If you don't currently read Penny Arcade, you should start.


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     Post Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:35 pm 
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    Okay, seems awesome. Only problem I have is that you say 'die' instead of 'croak'

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     Post Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 8:57 pm 
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    Posted 3rd part just now. So the story is complete. It's kinda rough, but I wrote it in just 2 days, so there wasn't too much room for polish. I don't tend to write in 1st person POV, so that's part of the issue with it.

    Also, the whole thing is kinda just a setup for the joke at the very end. It's not a very obscure reference, so all I can offer as a reward to the first correct guess is a Shiny Internet Penny.

    I'd really like to hear what people think of it. Don't be afraid to tell me how awesome I am. Also don't be afraid to insult my parentage if you hated it.

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     Post Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 10:07 pm 
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    It was great, and to think that my thread inspired you... I really am awesome.

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