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Tower of London! Werewolves of London! Loving it! I can't wait to know more about his personality and how he'll fit into the Sisterhood. :)

I have a suggestion regarding Alexa, though. Since we have Alexis, could you changed her name to Siri? Similar Signamancy, but no confusion over which is which? :)


I goofed.

Alexa should just be Lexa.

Soon to be fixed.

Edit: And Fixed.


That works. :) Also, maybe consider changing your signature to promote this story? :) :) :)

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     Post subject: Re: Chapter 8
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    Merilynne wrote:
    That works. :) Also, maybe consider changing your signature to promote this story? :) :) :)


    I suppose I could consider it.

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     Post Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2018 8:53 pm 
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    criticalhit wrote:
    Loved the detail. Such a nice post, rich in variety. There were relationships, strategy, foreshadowing, and unexpected tech (magical) developments. Really enjoyed the length of this one. I could see maybe one more 'shop' chapter like this one. After that, it's time for Khan to get out there and Burninate something!!

    When did Justin last level? It's been a while, right? I love how Justin thinks his way to new abilities through the magic system and his knowhow from earth. It would also be cool to see hin unlock something through straight-up leveling (or learning new spells).

    Thanks for these posts!!

    EDIT: Hey, I think "Alexa" is still used instead of "Lexa" in the chapter.



    I've been anxious to get Justin and DK back into the thick of things as well. And that is going to start in the next chapter.

    Justin hasn't leveled in a little while but he hasn't been fighting much lately either. Also, he's a higher level so leveling should be less frequent. Which isn't to say he won't level, it just won't happen often.

    I have been considering ways he could learn more spells. It's new to him still and he tends to think of himself as a warrior first, which may impair his abilities somewhat.

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     Post Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2018 1:23 pm 
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    Waiting... ;)

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    I promise that it is in the works. :)

    Between work and family matters, I haven't been able to get past the half way mark. I've actually been disappointed that I couldn't get it out sooner.

    Though, at the same time, I feel as though I should apologize ahead of time for some of the content of the next chapter.

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    The_Author_Is_Dead wrote:
    I promise that it is in the works. :)

    Between work and family matters, I haven't been able to get past the half way mark. I've actually been disappointed that I couldn't get it out sooner.

    Though, at the same time, I feel as though I should apologize ahead of time for some of the content of the next chapter.

    :shock: Now I'm not sure I'm ready for it.

    Take your time. :)

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     Post Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2018 9:24 pm 
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    I feel as though I should apologize ahead of time for some of the content of the next chapter.


    Oh dear. That sounds . . intriguing? ominous? pre-emptive?

    On behalf of your loyal readerbase, I officially absolve thee of thy future sin. Which is totally a thing I'm authorized to do. Yup.

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     Post Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2018 5:58 am 
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    Well concerned or not I am totally hanging out for this next installment. Love your work! Keep it coming

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     Post Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2018 4:18 pm 
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    Stalking The_Author_Is_Dead for the next installment. I may be an addict for erfworld fanfic stories. Since Spicymancer has been done with his for awhile and Salvage has been slow I need me fanfic fix.

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    Mmm. Fanfics are the one section of this site I most miss. There've been too few lately, too few . .

    I say that, of course, but gotta recognize that I have personally contributed zero fanfics. Thank you all you authors who have (even dead ones)!

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    The_Author_Is_Dead wrote:
    Though, at the same time, I feel as though I should apologize ahead of time for some of the content of the next chapter.
    I now wonder what this was in reference to.

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    Jatopian wrote:
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    Though, at the same time, I feel as though I should apologize ahead of time for some of the content of the next chapter.
    I now wonder what this was in reference to.


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    I felt I got carried away with the double entendres.

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    The_Author_Is_Dead wrote:
    Jatopian wrote:
    The_Author_Is_Dead wrote:
    Though, at the same time, I feel as though I should apologize ahead of time for some of the content of the next chapter.
    I now wonder what this was in reference to.


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    I felt I got carried away with the double entendres.


    Ahhhh... and I was wondering the same thing. Yeah, it might have been a bit much, but it's not like the whole update was filled with them. :) I enjoyed it.

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    Will you be posting the rest of these to the submissions page? I ask because if you are, I will tip and comment there. If not, I will tip and comment on the forums. I want to get you as much attention as I can.

    As always, excellent stuff.

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    Good day,

    Merilynne, I'm glad you were able to enjoy them despite the volume.

    Salvage, I will be updating in submissions, though it may take awhile.

    Speaking of updating, it may be a while before I am able to update again. We just had a second death in the family inside of a week so I don't see me doing much creatively in the next little while.

    I will be back though, eventually.

    Until then, take care.

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    The_Author_Is_Dead wrote:

    Speaking of updating, it may be a while before I am able to update again. We just had a second death in the family inside of a week so I don't see me doing much creatively in the next little while.

    I will be back though, eventually.

    Until then, take care.


    I am sorry for your losses. I do not know what else to say to that whole situation except maybe "Fuck!". I hope you and your family can stay sane. Take the time you need for yourself. Your readers can and will wait.

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    The_Author_Is_Dead wrote:
    Good day,

    Merilynne, I'm glad you were able to enjoy them despite the volume.

    Salvage, I will be updating in submissions, though it may take awhile.

    Speaking of updating, it may be a while before I am able to update again. We just had a second death in the family inside of a week so I don't see me doing much creatively in the next little while.

    I will be back though, eventually.

    Until then, take care.


    I, too, am sorry for your loss.

    Thank you for putting so much of yourself into these stories -- ideas, time and personality. I am certainly grateful. Your stories helped make my life better during a dark time. You will be missed, and prayed for, until you return.

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    The_Author_Is_Dead wrote:
    Speaking of updating, it may be a while before I am able to update again. We just had a second death in the family inside of a week so I don't see me doing much creatively in the next little while.

    I will be back though, eventually.

    Until then, take care.


    I can't add much to what has been said, so I'll just say I am sorry for your loss.

    Take your time with the next update, I would rather have slow interesting updates than fast boring updates.

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