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Hi all, it's been a while, but here's what I've been working on these past few months... well, longer even. I got the idea for this fanfic maybe a year ago, and was holding off until concluding Hungry Jungle.

I'm going in a different direction with this one, and no, I don't just mean moving things from a jungle to a desert. :mrgreen: So all comments and criticism are welcome.

It's going to be multi part, probably in the 10 to 15 part range. I have the full arc and 4 parts done so far, but I tend to short sell the actual length.

Anyway, here it is.

Unjust Deserts, Part 1

Hope you enjoy it! :D

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    Unjust Deserts, Part 2

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    Unjust Deserts, Part 3

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    Unjust Deserts, Part 4

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    Hi all, here's part 11.

    Unjust Deserts, Part 11

    I just want to take a moment to thank everyone for reading, because it's been a blast writing and reading your reactions. As this is a good 2/3rds point, I'm going to take a bit of a break here so I can rebuild my buffer of prewritten parts. A series of family duties have cut into my writing time, and I want to make sure the next parts aren't rushed.

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